Cry

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Dan
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Cry

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This song has a swing to it... Difficult to explain. Should be an album opener.

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When the dark turns to night it will swallow us all,
when i'm gone who will catch you if ever you fall,
If you needed some love im your one im your all,
Keep your head held up high, stay pround and stand up tall,

So cry, cry my dear,
let loose every tear,
theres no hidden treasure,
they'll be no more pleasure
Goodbye, bye my dear,
The future was never so clear,
im not having fun,
oh what have you become
Not no more.

Like bullets and wine and cheap cigarrets
My tale is twisted and full of regrets
I could fantasize stories you would never expect
I've lost all my hope and all my respect

So cry, cry my dear,
let loose every tear,
theres no hidden treasure,
they'll be no more pleasure
Goodbye, bye my dear,
The future was never so clear,
im not having fun,
oh what have you become
What a whore.

And on the third chapter my tale explodes
Im left all alone at the side of the road
I've given back way much more than i owed
Im calling your name forever echoed

So cry, cry my dear,
let loose every tear,
theres no hidden treasure,
they'll be no more pleasure
Goodbye, bye my dear,
The future was never so clear,
im not having fun,
oh what have you become
Let's begin.
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Re: Cry

Post by Hentaiman »

I liked the chorus :D

a little less the verses , but the chorus is great :D
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Re: Cry

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I too liked the chorus
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