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I've been working on a new song
This is the finished version

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Send Off Suicide

Don’t pretend your love for me
Don’t ever lie or talk to me
All alone we lie here waiting
For this to end

But it’s just too late
It’s just too late

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
Send off suicide

Just sit around and think of you
My tears are falling just for you
I'm caught red handed
You found me out

But its too late time is running out
So sing our last lullaby
It’s all gone now time to die
Oh my god I just can't wait

But it’s too late
It’s just too late

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
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He’ll see you soon
At least he’ll try
But I dunno when it’s gonna be
When you go you turn up
But you keep asking but we don’ know

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
Send off suicide

Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!

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EDIT: I finished the lyrics, what you guys think?
Last edited by Boni on Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Not a bad start :)
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make it a bit longer
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wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
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41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
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tomhoppus wrote:
41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
i think it was a joke dude. you know "make it a bit LONGER"
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lol
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tomhoppus wrote: You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
Calm down. Of course, it was a joke. I don't know the guy. I'm not trying to offend hin or mock him. I'm just trying to make my interweb experience a little funnier(for me).
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tomhoppus wrote:
41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
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wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
That's only the first verse, I'm still in the process of writing it down it tends to take me a while to finish.
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That's it finished

What you make of it??
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nice its longer.
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not bad but i don't get why do everybody write love songs or broken hearts smt ...
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kanguv41 wrote:not bad but i don't get why do everybody write love songs or broken hearts smt ...
This song is about a personal experience of mine, most of them
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