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Stop This Pressure [a song i wrote]

Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:32 pm
by Hentaiman
Well, here's another song i wrote.
Its actually an old one that i just found now so i changed it and repaired it a little.
There's a chance i posted it here before but i don't remember and i changed it anyway, so here it is, Its called "Stop This Pressure", formerly titled just "This Pressure" (if i really posted it here before). enjoy :D


[verse 1]
Constant pressure
Leaves me with no control
Unsatisfying pleasure
Leaves me craving for more
If I could only change this
I would ask for more
Take me! Screw it!
I just can't take it anymore!

[chorus]
Forget, forget what we had
It wasn't like you said
You made me so miserable!
Stop, you've been so bad
Forget how we met
And just stop this pressure!

[verse 2]
What we had
Was just a fuckin' waste
Like a fuckin' nightmare
I thought will never end
I never knew before
I never asked for more
You had me in your cage of lies
Torturing me with fire and ice!

[Chorus]
[Chorus + Stop this pressure! Stop this pressure! STOP THIS PRESSURE!]

[interlude + rhythm outro]
[quiet vocals]
I've been so stupid
So easy to get
so cold, so empty...
I fuckin' regret...

Re: Stop This Pressure [a song i wrote]

Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:49 pm
by wiggs1441
its ok homes

Re: Stop This Pressure [a song i wrote]

Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 6:15 pm
by HilgaMan
It's good.