Stop This Pressure [a song i wrote]

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Stop This Pressure [a song i wrote]

Post by Hentaiman »

Well, here's another song i wrote.
Its actually an old one that i just found now so i changed it and repaired it a little.
There's a chance i posted it here before but i don't remember and i changed it anyway, so here it is, Its called "Stop This Pressure", formerly titled just "This Pressure" (if i really posted it here before). enjoy :D


[verse 1]
Constant pressure
Leaves me with no control
Unsatisfying pleasure
Leaves me craving for more
If I could only change this
I would ask for more
Take me! Screw it!
I just can't take it anymore!

[chorus]
Forget, forget what we had
It wasn't like you said
You made me so miserable!
Stop, you've been so bad
Forget how we met
And just stop this pressure!

[verse 2]
What we had
Was just a fuckin' waste
Like a fuckin' nightmare
I thought will never end
I never knew before
I never asked for more
You had me in your cage of lies
Torturing me with fire and ice!

[Chorus]
[Chorus + Stop this pressure! Stop this pressure! STOP THIS PRESSURE!]

[interlude + rhythm outro]
[quiet vocals]
I've been so stupid
So easy to get
so cold, so empty...
I fuckin' regret...
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its ok homes
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NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!

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It's good.
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