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Post by tomhoppus »

First song I wrote.... feedback please :D
Why do you deny me in everything I do?
You nag so much I can’t take it
Why don’t you ever encourage me in all that I do?
People who meet you always call you a bitch

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen

I don’t doubt you in all that you say
I love you so much but you can’t see
People that I meet don’t call me gay
You run at the sight of puny bee

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen

You say you want to break up with me
So you can be free
Just stay together for one more day

Fine!

You say you want to break up with me
So you can be free
Just stay together for one more day

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen
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Post by BrandonCorey »

Wow that's great for a first song.
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Post by tomhoppus »

thanks alot of people say that :oops:

ill prolly be making a new song tomorrow
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puny bee?
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yes, that part is about my older brother :lol: hes frightened of them
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hha nice one. I like it :D
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Post by HilgaMan »

I actually think that is a very good song. :>
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