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My 2nd try at writing lyrics

Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:55 pm
by guest
Ok heres my second try. it rhymes. i like rhyming. (I'm straight edge)

Last night, just was not fun
You were a bitch, to almost everyone
Last night, was really bad
You drank so much, it was kind of sad
I'm the one who remembers it
I don't smoke pot,and i don't drink that shit
Now I turn my head and look away
I ask myself, why did i stay?
You laugh at me, and say I'm weird
I'm not that strange, i just don't drink beer
You choose your life style, and i choose mine
Do what you want, and I'll be fine.

You criticize My Ideals
I won't criticize Your Ideals
You're free to do What you like
I don't hate and i don't judge




(Needs a second verse....)

Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:01 am
by Dylan
this is great. FINALLY a song that i can relate to!! :D

Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:54 am
by guest
cool!!!