Hating You All

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Hating You All

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this is about having a bad day, where nothing at all goes your way, you feel like everyone and everything is against you, and you cant take it anymore

Verse 1
It's one of those days where nothing goes right
Fists are clenched but I don't wanna fight
Every little thing is a reason for rage
Blood is red hot and I feel like I'm caged
There's no room to run, I can't break free
I'm shaking from all the adrenaline inside of me

Chorus
Fuck the world, I'm sick of this
I don't care and I can't resist
Hating you all with all my heart
You steal my trust and rip it apart
So I'm breaking out of this shell
To damn you all to hell
I'm gonna put you in your place
And watch the shock fill your face

Verse 2
This dark cloud follows me everywhere I go
They say what doesn't kill you only helps you grow
I'm sick of this knot in my stomach tightening all the time
My thoughts are running rampant and I'm losing my mind
No one can save me, I'm in this by myself
I'm a danger to everyone, including myself

(Chorus)

Bridge
You just love seeing me in pain, don't you?
Causing the agony I go through
Well I won't have it anymore
Everything is grey
I can't see straight
I need to cool down before it's too late

(Chorus)
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Some days it just gets so hard
And I don’t wanna slip away.
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Dude, this is EXACTLY how I feel! :holyshit:
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Not bad. I can relate to this as well.
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thank you! glad you could relate!
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Do you have music for it?
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SickofEveryone wrote:Do you have music for it?
no i wish. i can write lyrics and instrumental material, but unfortunately i cant seem to be able to put them together :sosad:
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sprinks41 wrote:
SickofEveryone wrote:Do you have music for it?
no i wish. i can write lyrics and instrumental material, but unfortunately i cant seem to be able to put them together :sosad:
Hmmm, i was like that at first but the more I do it the better I get. Change the rhythm of the music to fit certain parts of the song.
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