Well this is a very rough draft right now, I write quite a bit of lyrics in my spare time...here's one:
I try to achieve perfection
but it's really just a reflection
of how I let you down
squeezed your hand let go
and watch you fall
I try to make you smile
never lasts more than awhile
there's always something I could do
but never realized till after
well I can pretend I'm an angel
just rugged, scuffed, roughed up wings
clipped and tattered
and I can no longer sing
the harmonies of happiness
till I know you're happy
till then I'm your fallen angel
banish me, there's nothing else to tell
I'd love to hear your thoughts:)
Fallen Angel
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Re: Fallen Angel
2nd half is pretty god damn rad
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Re: Fallen Angel
I believe Pieces was your influence :) but right,the second part is kinda cool
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
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