New Song (Scars)
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New Song (Scars)
If you're not busy take a listen to my song "Scars". What you hear is only a rough copy I recorded one night when I was bored. The real song is supposed to have drums and bass and be played on an electric guitar but you'll get the idea. I wrote it this summer after I heard skumfuk. It was kind of my approach at what I thought the new album would sound like. Also I added in "screaming bloody murder" as a reference haha.
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Re: New Song (Scars)
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Re: New Song (Scars)
i really like it, sad that we can't hear your voice that good
Some days it just gets so hard
And I don’t wanna slip away.
Re: New Song (Scars)
Is this it?
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Re: New Song (Scars)
sounds good.. but a little too similar to Skumfuk.
great lyrics though
great lyrics though
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Re: New Song (Scars)
Thank you! hahaLars wrote: Is this it?
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i like your song.
i don't really think skumfuk at all when i listen to your song.
the worst part of this song is your voice. it's a nice sounding voice but you stop yourself
from letting your voice shine, its like its caged or something, let it out let it go. work on that.
imagine the same aggressiveness deryck's voice had in the dtli and chuck days.
deryck had a type of yell that worked well for him to emphasize parts and i would imagine it would
work well for you too.
keep working on this song its got tons of potential. cant wait to hear more.
guitar sounds great!
i don't really think skumfuk at all when i listen to your song.
the worst part of this song is your voice. it's a nice sounding voice but you stop yourself
from letting your voice shine, its like its caged or something, let it out let it go. work on that.
imagine the same aggressiveness deryck's voice had in the dtli and chuck days.
deryck had a type of yell that worked well for him to emphasize parts and i would imagine it would
work well for you too.
keep working on this song its got tons of potential. cant wait to hear more.
guitar sounds great!
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Re: New Song (Scars)
Would sound pretty kickass with the actual instruments. I like it.
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Re: New Song (Scars)
Thank you, I appreciate the constructive critisizm. If I ever get an electric version recorded with all the instruments I'll try and let my voice resonate more. I was being sort of quiet that night too because it was late in the night and I have roommates haha.jsd2 wrote:i like your song.
i don't really think skumfuk at all when i listen to your song.
the worst part of this song is your voice. it's a nice sounding voice but you stop yourself
from letting your voice shine, its like its caged or something, let it out let it go. work on that.
imagine the same aggressiveness deryck's voice had in the dtli and chuck days.
deryck had a type of yell that worked well for him to emphasize parts and i would imagine it would
work well for you too.
keep working on this song its got tons of potential. cant wait to hear more.
guitar sounds great!
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Re: New Song (Scars)
That's sounded really good! I really like the chorus.
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Re: New Song (Scars)
WOW!
that was awesome!
I didn't expect that..
that was awesome!
I didn't expect that..