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this is about thinking too much and worrying about stuff for no reason, because it just turns out fine in the end. basically it's about having an anxiety attack.

Intro
Welcome to my world of craziness
You may enter at your own risk
Forget your brain, you'll never mind it
There's no truth, we never find it
Life is so crazy in itself
But sometimes I can't live with myself
That may sound morally obscene
Listen to this and you'll see what I mean

Verse 1
Prisoner of my thoughts with no way out
Surrounded by fear, knee-deep in doubt
Hallucinations reign my view
Feel so lost I don't know what to do
Numbstruck, my body fills with pain
Thoughts fly around and form a hurricane
My head is spinning out of control
A front-row seat to my own funeral

Chorus
I'm looking around in panic
I'm running around all frantic
I can't control this manic
My thoughts are all satanic
I open my mouth and desperately try to scream
Wake me when it's over so I know it was just a dream

Verse 2
I'm so sick and tired of all these explosions
It's hard enough to even go through the motions
The puzzle is a tragedy at my expense
The pieces are scattered and nothing makes sense
There's a hole in my heart and my stomach's in my throat
My hand trembles as I write the suicide note
There's not a day I'm not tortured by them
Just leave me for dead in the asylum

(Chorus)

Bridge
Sometimes it's so hard to breathe
Sometimes it's so hard to believe
I need no medication
I need no words of sympathy
The voices in my head say there's nothing wrong with me
Throb and burn, they scare the shit out of me
How the hell can anyone be proud of me?
The demons scare me time after time
But they'll never take from me what's mine

(Chorus)
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Wow that's a pretty awesome song. I especially like the intro and first verse. Great job.
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Great job dude keep it up
It just a sad song
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Don't you have an album by now, sprinks?
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turtlehobopirate and sum54184 thank you!

hahaha not quite Jake, but thank you, that made me smile! :smile:
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sprinks41 wrote:turtlehobopirate and sum54184 thank you!

hahaha not quite Jake, but thank you, that made me smile! :smile:
Well, you write fuckin AMAZING songs. I'd really consider trying to get em out in the world somehow!
Keep sharing those lyrics, and i'll comment em all!!!
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Jake-41 wrote:
sprinks41 wrote:turtlehobopirate and sum54184 thank you!

hahaha not quite Jake, but thank you, that made me smile! :smile:
Well, you write fuckin AMAZING songs. I'd really consider trying to get em out in the world somehow!
Keep sharing those lyrics, and i'll comment em all!!!
Will do man! Thanks!
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you = beast.
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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upperclasszero wrote:you = beast.
hahaha thank you!
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