Just a chorus thinking of verses still.
My life is gold
Fuck the whole world, I know
This is getting too old
for me, Why can't we
Make peace not war
Fuck the whole world, I'm sore
this is getting too hard
for me, Why can't we
live a life
perfectly
Yes, i wrote this when i was in a very pissed off mood
a chorus i wrote
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Re: a chorus i wrote
oo erik you poet.
i like alot, very BCR
i like alot, very BCR
If we could sit together a moment
and talk forever just to pass the time
i would smile as the shivers and chills run down my spine
when your eyes are locked on mine
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Re: a chorus i wrote
nice but really needs a verse