Salt In A Cut

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Salt In A Cut

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I don't know if I will ever finish it but here:

Everyday I see your face
And I know I can't have you.

Everyday I see your face
And I know


[Chorus]
It feels like salt in a cut,
So painful in full.
Like a valley of sorrows,
so saddening and dull.
And when you walk by you I see your pretty face.
My admiration is hard to retrace.
And I know I can't have you.

It's time I had the balls to ask you out.
I know you'd say no.

It's time I had the balls to ask you out.
And I know

[Chorus]
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oldy :P
I'm the tower, you're the airplane.
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and talk forever just to pass the time
i would smile as the shivers and chills run down my spine
when your eyes are locked on mine
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dearyou_182 wrote:oldy :P
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Nic wrote:
dearyou_182 wrote:oldy :P
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LULR
I'm the tower, you're the airplane.
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dearyou_182 wrote:
Nic wrote:
dearyou_182 wrote:oldy :P
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LULR
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thats amazing. remember to try not to screw it up when you try to finish it (i speak by experience)
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Gibsum 41 wrote:thats amazing. remember to try not to screw it up when you try to finish it (i speak by experience)
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It's awesome, nice job.
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Gibsum 41 wrote:thats amazing. remember to try not to screw it up when you try to finish it (i speak by experience)
thanks man. ill post more of my lyrics later.
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Its very very nice :D
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Hentaiman wrote:Its very very nice :D
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