Mess You Make

tomhoppus · Post by **tomhoppus** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:25 am

My fav song that Ive made

NOTE: this is the noly song that mentions blink and sum

Liking so called punk rock bands
Fucked up families and
Knowing that you always will be there
Right by my side
Knowing that someone shall always bear
Those tough times

What is this all about?
Have we all lost our minds?
Our friends would always talk about
Those good times
And when we where lost
You were always there

Messing around all day long
Talking about Tom DeLonge
Helping one out in a time of need
Showing of when is right
Helping one out when as bleed
In rough times

What is this all about?
Have we all lost our minds?
Our friends would always talk about
Those good times
And when we where lost
You were always there

What is this all about?
Have we all lost our minds?
Our friends would always talk about
Those good times
And when we where lost
You were always there

Finding a way
To get through those tough days
Talking ourself away
And eating those lays

Just like everything should be
When everything seems a breeze
Liking ourselfs for who we are
And not someone else

You were always there
You were always there
You were always there
You were always there for me!

BrandonCorey · Post by **BrandonCorey** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:44 am

Don't take this offensive but, I don't think this makes alot of sense. I get the point of it but when you read the lyrics of a song it should sound natural and this is a bit odd. And it seems to me that theres no song pattern like verse chorus verse chorus etc..............But then again I have to give you some credit because there were parts of the song that I really liked.

tomhoppus · Post by **tomhoppus** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:47 am

ts just supposes to be about growing up

but i see where your coming from

BrandonCorey · Post by **BrandonCorey** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:00 am

dont get me wrong its still an amazing song, I think it would go really well with a nice fast punkrock melody

Gibsum 41 · Post by **Gibsum 41** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:21 am

i kinda agree with brandoncorey. i think the lyrics are absoulutely awesome but i do think it needs some work on the melody.

couldnt find the part were you mention the sums. where was it?

tomhoppus · Post by **tomhoppus** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:30 pm

oh, it was blink and sums The so called punk rock bands

cuzthere not really punk rock but for sum reason 10 year old kids think they are :?

Gibsum 41 · Post by **Gibsum 41** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:52 pm

oh ok. i liked that verse :)