Forever and Always (Lyrics Feedback plz!)

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Forever and Always (Lyrics Feedback plz!)

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Everything will be all right
Everything will be all right
I’ll guide you home
For only you I’ll fight
In the dark through night
I’ll guide you home
I’ll be your light

From the shadows of the past
Be strong, don’t let them last
Believe in yourself believe in yourself,
It’s the only way your legacy will last

If the world ignores your calls
I’ll be right there with you
I’ll catch you if you fall
I’ll be there, I’ll be just yours

I’ll wipe the tears from your checks
You can rest your head on my shoulders
I won’t let anything hurt you
Close your eyes cause you’re home now

I promise everything will be all right
Everything will be all right
I’ll guide you home
For only you, I’ll fight
In the dark through the night
I’ll guide you home
I’ll be your light

I’ll shine a path so clear
Drive away the demons of despair
So you don’t need to worry
There’s no need to hurry
Take your time, I’m not going anywhere
I’ll be your guardian angel everywhere

Everywhere you go
I’ll always be there
Standing beside you or in your heart
Won’t let anything hurt you, now that I’m here

I promise to always be there
I promise I’ll always be the one to care
Even if everyone turns their back to your call
I’ll always be the one to catch you if you fall, if you fall
I promise everything will be all right
Everything will be all right
I’ll guide you home
For you and me I’ll fight
In the dark through night
I’ll guide you home
I’ll be your light

I’ll fight for you, I’ll shine the way
I’ll guide you back home
I’ll stand beside you, you won’t be alone
Even when I’m not here
Just look inside, I’m right there
The blood running through your veins
The beating of your heart
I’ll always be there for you

I promise everything will be all right
For you and only you I’ll fight
In the dark, through the night
I’ll be the light to guide you home
To fight away the demons of despair
I’ll be there forever and always,
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I'm sorry but I don't really like it. It's a bit cliché.
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Stylish but not solid.
Keep things solid.

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now i know you're stealing song titles. this is a title of a bullet for my valentine song. get out.
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ThanksForTheVenom wrote:now i know you're stealing song titles. this is a title of a bullet for my valentine song. get out.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 009AAXWSuX
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not the best lyrics in the world, but not that bad, but it awfully reminds me of The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus song ... I haven't listened to them for months so I can't really say which one, but I think it was called Your Guardian Angel
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ThanksForTheVenom wrote:now i know you're stealing song titles. this is a title of a bullet for my valentine song. get out.
I think he stole it from Taylor Swift!! :surprised:
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