shit

JESSter · Post by **JESSter** » Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:49 pm

im sorry for making this. eh im a shitty writer

this is about.. well i think you can figure it out.
emotional overload, eh.

Sleep well, my darling

you were always there
next to me
hand in my hand
we fell asleep

but your hands are cold now
what do you scare
is something wrong babe
please talk to me

you arent talking
youre packing your stuff
i dont wanna know the reason
i dont wanna know at all

you know
i cried for you
i wouldve died for you
i shared my fuckin life with you
and its so hard to fall asleep
its so hard
for me to
fall asleep

and one a bit older, i wrote this like 1,5 years ago, its about my friend who died (suicide):

I'll come right after you

what happened?
where did the time disappear?
i tried my best
i was there for real
we talked all our things throw
you said youre not well
i wanted to help you
the time runned out my friend
and im never going to see you again.

sometimes i think
what if its the best like this
i still feel bitter
for not being able to save you
id take your place
anytime i could
i dont care what they say
i still love you

rest in peace man
wait for me there
i promise ill be there
as soon as i can

theyre both true. and they sound much better singed.

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:21 am

Awww.... *hugs*

Everything is gonna be alright
Everything is gonna be alright
Everything is gonna be alright
Be strong believe. :)

^^Yellowcard-Can't remember the name of the song, haha.

JESSter · Post by **JESSter** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:22 am

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:24 am

:) <3

Arcane · Post by **Arcane** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:54 am

shit im really sorry about your friend
a friend of mine died recently feel your pain
your lyrics are really emotional but they are amazing. good luck with any other work
and im glad you sticking to raw emotion insetad of generated crap

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 1:59 am

Yeah, generated crap is stupid. Unless you've got real good talent and can make it seem natural.

Arcane · Post by **Arcane** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:01 am

yup :) there must be about 5 real different types of generated crap that crap bands like to copy and reitterate but thats shit
use your own experiences and its so much truer. =] well said my N00bmaster zam =]

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:07 am

swish wrote:yup :) there must be about 5 real different types of generated crap that crap bands like to copy and reitterate but thats shit
use your own experiences and its so much truer. =] well said my N00bmaster zam =]

Call me daddy. :)

I'll call you son. :)

Arcane · Post by **Arcane** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:09 am

daddy =D

im going to bed now though daddy and mr song writer
in england its.... shit its 2:09am
cya dudes

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:11 am

Mrs. ;) She's a mrs. son.

JESSter · Post by **JESSter** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:38 am

:D lolz

Arcane · Post by **Arcane** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:38 pm

lol damn i must have mispelt mrs, coz i knew u were a girl =]

my bad

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Sat Aug 11, 2007 2:56 pm

swish wrote:lol damn i must have mispelt mrs, coz i knew u were a girl =]

my bad

Ok, you're forgiven.

Arcane · Post by **Arcane** » Sun Aug 12, 2007 7:22 pm