this is a song about my friend Kris. she suddenly ended our friendship out of the blue without even telling me, so i wrote about it. notice the clever acronym title, (K)ept (R)unning (I)n (S)ilence
Intro
What happend to you?
Where's the one I once knew?
I don't know who or what you've become
Why or what this all started from
It was said that we'd never lose each other
That you thought of me as a brother
And trusted me more than your mother
If you decide to wake up in the end
Hope you realize you lost a friend
You'll be sorry then
Chorus
Sick of how your life is, you kept running in silence
Wish I knew what it's all about
I've done all I could to reach out
You resisted someway somehow
Verse 1
Hurting from things green and white
Among others you did out of sight
Can't learn guidance from being on your own
That's what you get out of a broken home
Pre-Chorus
No wonder why I hadn't heard from you in longer than so long
(You are not as bad as some)
I never thought we'd end like this but I guess that I was wrong
(But you are as fake as they come)
(Chorus)
Verse 2
No note, no goodbye, not even a courtesy call
So much for the times I picked you up when you'd fall
Talking all the time, we made a great team
Now you've disappeared like it was all just a dream
(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
Bridge
An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth
Nothing worse than a lie, taken as the truth
Don't turn the tables, or try to break my heart
I know you don't care, you haven't from the start
(Chorus)
Kept Running In Silence
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
Wow dude this is amazing. Your writing skills are awesome!
Sorry about Kris, though.
Sorry about Kris, though.
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
I don't like it...at all.
It seems forced.
It seems forced.
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
I like it, it's angry and shows the emotion.
Yeah and too bad about Kris :(
Nice acronym, though!
Yeah and too bad about Kris :(
Nice acronym, though!
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
Thanks a lot i really appreciate your compliments and feedback
No Slither, it's not forced.
No Slither, it's not forced.
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yea i disagree with slither
it doesnt sound forced at all and sounds great man!
it doesnt sound forced at all and sounds great man!
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thanks dudeShiv wrote:yea i disagree with slither
it doesnt sound forced at all and sounds great man!
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
It may be a little forced but it's still amazing. The only reason it's forced is because he felt like he needed to write it and thats good.
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
It's amazing how you wrote this song. Great song!
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Da_Aman and turtlehobopirate thank you both i appreciate it :]
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
You probably don't even know what I was talking about.sprinks41 wrote:Thanks a lot i really appreciate your compliments and feedback
No Slither, it's not forced.
I was talking about the lyrics. Duh.
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
as in the rhymes were forced? if so, then again, they're not.Slither wrote:You probably don't even know what I was talking about.
I was talking about the lyrics. Duh.
otherwise, please explain what you mean?
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Re: Kept Running In Silence
Forget him,
I dont usually comment on lyrics, but thats a touching song you got there. Good job!
I dont usually comment on lyrics, but thats a touching song you got there. Good job!
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thank you very much! :]phatass wrote:Forget him,
I dont usually comment on lyrics, but thats a touching song you got there. Good job!
Re: Kept Running In Silence
thats really good., youve put the story across well, and nice title :)
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thanks man :]PunkSteve wrote:thats really good., youve put the story across well, and nice title :)
Re: Kept Running In Silence
no problem :)