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Rough, brittle pavement at your feet
light radiating down
from the street lamp next to me
smoke filled air plagues the
cold windy night
i'm not going down without a fight

i can talk 'til my mouth get sore
hate filled words
hurting you more and more
you start to talk
i subtly cringe
cuz i can hurt you but i cant take it

So please spare me this one time
dont make me wait all night
i dont mean a word im saying
i just want you at my side

the rain starts pouring down
it washes away my pride
my head starts to pound
i let my hands cover my eyes
the thunder blocks what you say
i thank god inside my mind

you're still talking as i silently debate
how long im gonna stand here
and let you decide my fate
my hair sticks to my face
my mind goes blank
de..terior..ating...

so please spare me this one time
dont make me wait all night
i dont mean a word im saying
i dont want to say goodbye
so please stay at my side
because i cant withstand my fights
i dont mean a word im saying
i just want you at my side
at my side
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Post by Kelbunk »

have you thought of any sort of title for this song haha
it doesnt need one really tho..i thought it was good..i especially liked the second bunch...
Bass Cone wrote: i can talk 'til my mouth get sore
hate filled words
hurting you more and more
you start to talk
i subtly cringe
cuz i can hurt you but i cant take it
that..that was my favorite part
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Post by ReemFTW »

wow I love the way you described the setting
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Post by PunkSteve »

Kelbunk wrote:have you thought of any sort of title for this song haha
it doesnt need one really tho..i thought it was good..i especially liked the second bunch...
Bass Cone wrote: i can talk 'til my mouth get sore
hate filled words
hurting you more and more
you start to talk
i subtly cringe
cuz i can hurt you but i cant take it
that..that was my favorite part
yes - i totally agree... this song is really good, and only a simple title is needed... maybe just a small phrase from one of the verses, or just a title, where its not mentioned in the song :)

well done!
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YOU FUCKING WHORE!!!!!!!! GTFO!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!
you have far too much time on your hands

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