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Honestly...this isnt a great song..i was just kinda writing one day when i was really pissed off at a priest for some odd reason (i'm not going into that haha) and i just went bananas. It's basically a really quick pissed-off spit in your face arrogant rant against stuff...

It's called Clots...

Religious fanatics keep kids locked in their attics
All hopped up on self-righteous thoughts
Keep us bleeding 'till the blood clots

Believe what you want, but don't push that on me
I'll find answers on my own, we'll never all agree

CHORUS:
Fuck Religion, Fuck decisions
Your arrogance clouds my vision
Stick to your own thoughts, I'll keep to mine too
These people don't need me and they don't need you
Let everyone see we need to find our own truths

All you do is bitch while the whole world fights,
You wonder why it's like this, but you can't accept the fact someone else may be right
You're selling easy answers to the questions people ask
Stop trying to rape our minds, is that such a daunting task?

Repeat some chorus dawg...

While we all suffer and bleed, just keep the fuck away from me.

-End-

yeah thats it...judge me...
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thats decent man.
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wooooah! I love it dude!!!!!!
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GreenReem41 wrote:wooooah! I love it dude!!!!!!
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YEAH FUCK PREISTS
awesome song boi
exnay on the hombre
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whoa..haha well thanks you guys :D this made my day
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u should listen to a song called "faith alone" by bad religion!!
That's really good man!!:D
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lee~<3~cone XD wrote:u should listen to a song called "faith alone" by bad religion!!
That's really good man!!:D
kay i'll check it out...
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I was listening to Noots while reading this and it sounded great!
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Da_Aman wrote:I was listening to Noots while reading this and it sounded great!
so..are you saying Noots sounded good or these lyrics would sound good with noots-style instrumentals haha
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teh second one.
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