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I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Rocket41 on Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:06 am

One Last Try

I tried for you
I did everything I thought I could
We tried to do
Everything that we thought we should
Can't count on you
You did what you thought you should
I miss you too
I did everything I knew I could

Tears fall as another minute goes by
A fake smile has ended this fateful night
The door closes as I begin to wonder why
Can't let this end without one last try

I've been replaced
cuz you did what I thought you would
I can't escape
From the feelings I thought were good
We can't fight
The moments we know were true
I know I'm right
Just wait and you'll see it too

Tears fall as another minute goes by
A fake smile has ended this fateful night
The door closes as I begin to wonder why
Can't let this end without one last try
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby upperclasszero on Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:39 pm

beastly
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Kano on Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:42 am

wow dude i like it the melody is awsome good job
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Rocket41 on Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:41 pm

thanks man
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Trainwreck on Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:22 pm

ohai I-Empire.
The lines I wear around my wrist
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For the record, I am not a Sum 41 fan. Just thought everyone should know this so that I don't have to type it out in every post I make.
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby LTS on Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:21 am

nice
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Rocket41 on Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:17 am

Kyle wrote:ohai I-Empire.


how'd you know it was me :smug:
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Bizzy-C92 on Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:43 pm

which way do you guys know the melody.....I can only see the lyrics....
We're all going to hell....!!!!
....Cross my heart and hope to die

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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby Ericuda on Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:32 am

This song would be PEREFECT for the dilema my ex and I have gotten ourselves into if a couple lyrics were just altered a bit.
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Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Postby PunkSteve on Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:10 pm

its great. especially for what looks like a 1st attempt.. nice simple lyrics etc :)
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