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2712 wrote:interesting concept. if i may suggest some things; it could use tighter edits especially around the scene where the guy has the gun. also, for the whole of the clip, the character is running from right to left, except at the seven second mark, he's running left to right. in film, there's whats called the 180 degree rule -you don't want to cross that 180 degree plane of action and reverse anything because it can get distracting and case confusion. in your case, with the part at :07, just mirror the image in whatever video editing suite so that the feet are running in the same direction as the character.
all in all, pretty good job. the concept is neat and you could make a longer video just based on the same concept if you wanted to. i don't know much about the film industry but i hear its pretty competitive especially if you wanna be a director. you have to want it bad. keep doing films and if its what you want to do, go for it.
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