Monica (Take Two)...

[Ericuda]

Hey, you may not remember or have seen my previous post, but it was Take One of this song. I've improved some of the lyrics this time. Since I last posted the song, we recently broke up. We've been seeing each other so much since. I think we'll soon be together again. I've changed some of the lyrics to bring them up to date with recent events. I think it's a bit better now. Anyway, here it is:

"Monica (Take Two)"

I’ve tried to tell myself we were just friends,
But now I’ve come to my decision and this is how it ends.
To understand it takes a while,
All that time spent in denial.
It’s so confusing that I just can’t comprehend.

Every time I see you smile, it overflows my heart.
You always help me mend it, never let it fall apart.
Can you feel the same affection?
Do you look the same direction?
Your stunning beauty always gives my eyes a start.

I guess it’s now or never.
I would stand by you forever.
So full of desperation,
This constant trepidation.
I’d trade my heart and soul for us to be together.

You’re so animated; you’re my one single desire.
Some might call it strangeness, but it’s hard not to admire.
There is not a competition,
There will be no contradiction.
Every time I see you, I know this won’t soon retire.

If I seem to be intense,
That’s because this feeling is immense.
Wishing I were there beside you,
It’s so hard to describe you.
Yet, here I am trying hard as if the words exist.

If we could start again,
I swear I’d be there right until the end.
A loss no one can repay.
The thought just won’t go away.
I wish I could repeat just once those words I vowed not say.

I’m at a loss of words; I find it hard to speak.
You walked into to my life and extinguished my disbelief.
Too many things to mention,
Beyond my mind’s extension
To find the words for what you’ve changed inside of me.

No matter where we land,
I won’t let go, ’cause this is where I stand.
I’ll fight my hesitation.
It is my obligation
To kill my anxiety and make you understand.

There’s nothing I won’t do,
It’s worth the pain if it keeps me close to you.
Now, it’s clear and I can feel
What I never thought was real.
Please know that all these words are true.
Please know that all these words are true.

I couldn’t live without you.
My life is all about you.
Please know that all these words are true.

[Kelbunk]

i really like it. good work.

[Hentaiman]

Nice one.

[Ericuda]

Thanks so much guys.

[silverdolphin]

good song!