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by pakiraider
Wed Apr 20, 2011 4:23 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Too Forgiving
Replies: 9
Views: 4547

Re: Too Forgiving

dope. love it!
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 13, 2011 5:40 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Anywhere But Here (Going Nowhere)
Replies: 3
Views: 1308

Anywhere But Here (Going Nowhere)

The world’s movin but I'm goin nowhere Stuck at a dead end Going nowhere, Wanna run away, anywhere but here There's no escaping This mess that I’m living Shakin from the stage fright Turn around nowhere to hide I'm going nowhere Wanna runaway Anywhere but here Be my escape and take me ...
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:27 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Deranged (Who The Fuck Do You Think You Are) (lyrics lol)
Replies: 4
Views: 1418

Re: Deranged (Who The Fuck Do You Think You Are) (lyrics lol

No one wants to leave feedback? LOL
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:18 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Deranged (Who The Fuck Do You Think You Are) (lyrics lol)
Replies: 4
Views: 1418

Deranged (Who The Fuck Do You Think You Are) (lyrics lol)

Let’s go! You say you’ve got a problem The way I dress, the way I look Point out my flaws and count ‘em But just who the fuck do you think you are? Brining everyone down, think you’ll get far? You think you’ve got the world In the palm of your hands Honey, let me te...
by pakiraider
Fri Apr 08, 2011 4:07 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Out of my hea
Replies: 6
Views: 4003

Re: Out of my hea

I like it, it's nice but sad
by pakiraider
Fri Apr 08, 2011 4:05 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Unspoken (Feedback plz :])
Replies: 3
Views: 1129

Unspoken (Feedback plz :])

The ink ran out of my pen The last letters fading away The last thoughts left unsaid Left engraved in my head Time passes us by You barely notice It drags on forever In my head you’ve become a memory Sitting on the ledge Too many thoughts driving me to the edge I’m desensitized, barely...
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 5:58 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Hold Me Now
Replies: 13
Views: 5789

Re: Hold Me Now

thank you for the feedback appreciate it =)
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 5:58 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Tell Me A Lie
Replies: 9
Views: 4808

Re: Tell Me A Lie

lol thank you for feedback, yeah Deryck influenced me a lot in this, also kind of helped that i'm going through a rough time right now. =(
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:52 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Hold Me Now
Replies: 13
Views: 5789

Re: Hold Me Now

lol i'm a guy. nd yeah some lines are in there for the girl i like to realize it's about her lol but yeah i'll try to make it more unique. thanks for the feedback!
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:31 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Hold Me Now
Replies: 13
Views: 5789

Re: Hold Me Now

In all honesty, i didn't think of those lyrics as i wrote this it's kind of unintentional lol. but i hope you see it as an original work cause the lyrics are meant to be positive and upbeat unlike Crash's :glad:
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:16 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Hold Me Now
Replies: 13
Views: 5789

Hold Me Now

Hold me now I wanna let go Hold me now Cause it’s startin to show Hold me now Let’s finish this story It’s like summer The feeling’s warm It’s starting to tingle As shivers run down my spine But I think we’ll be just fine Started in June Under a half crescen...
by pakiraider
Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:15 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Tell Me A Lie
Replies: 9
Views: 4808

Tell Me A Lie

Before anyone bashes me, I credit Sum 41 for the ideas in this piece. Razor blades cut through my skin I give up, you win Tell me lies, say words, make me believe Set me up to fall before you leave Tear me, Rip me, break me apart It’s what I deserve, I feel no remorse at all If this isnâ€â...
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:28 pm
Forum: Whatever
Topic: [!] The OFFISHALL Madjid Thread [!]
Replies: 29
Views: 4646

Re: [!] The OFFISHALL Madjid Thread [!]

lol salaam alakum
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:05 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Paper Stars
Replies: 7
Views: 4241

Re: Paper Stars

thank you everyone =)
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:55 pm
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Up All Night
Replies: 13
Views: 3410

Re: Up All Night

thank you everyone for the feedback i appreciate it, nd my bad for the confusion with blink i still don't know how to edit threads lol
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:49 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Up All Night
Replies: 13
Views: 3410

Re: Up All Night

yeah i kno, i want as many people to read it as possible, unfortunately none of them really appreciated it idk why tho?
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:00 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Up All Night
Replies: 13
Views: 3410

Re: Up All Night

thank you i appreciate it!
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:38 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Lonely Love (working title)
Replies: 10
Views: 2607

Re: Lonely Love (working title)

I like it! i'd call it hopeless or actually just go with Lonely Love (i think that's a good title for this piece)
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:04 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Up All Night
Replies: 13
Views: 3410

Re: Up All Night

didn't realize that, haven't listened to blink or heard blink news in a while lol. but can you guys actually leave feedback on what you thought of the poem/song?
by pakiraider
Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:42 am
Forum: Your Lyrics
Topic: Up All Night
Replies: 13
Views: 3410

Re: Up All Night

lol i couldn't think of anything better! why is the piece bad?